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What's Your Percentage?
How much negativity in your feedback can you stand? 10%... 20%? 90%? Every writer needs negative criticism. We need to be told no. We...
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Jun 13, 20242 min read
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The Empire's Ruin (Ashes of the Unhewn Throne, Book 1)
I am a new reader of Brian Staveley’s work. I regret to admit I had not seen his previous trilogy when it hit the shelves and haven’t...
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Jun 11, 20242 min read
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Perspective
Who you link to for a Point of View (POV) is extremely important in storytelling. I am going to give an example of a very short piece...
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Jun 6, 20245 min read
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Dialogue: When to Shut up
We have talked before about good and bad dialogue. In summary, bad dialogue is dialogue that is long-winded, generic, tells us nothing,...
kevinholochwostaut
Jun 1, 20242 min read
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Bibliotherapy part 2:
Do you want to reduce stress levels, lower heart rate, and ease tension in the muscles? Usually, this kind of claim is a start toa bad...
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May 28, 20242 min read
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Dialogue: Filler Words
Crafting dialogue that sounds like real speech while still being purposeful and engaging can be difficult. Real conversations often...
kevinholochwostaut
May 24, 20242 min read
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To reread, or not to reread: Dune
I read Dune many years ago, when I was in my teens, and I didn’t care for the book. I never moved on to other books in the series. But....
kevinholochwostaut
May 21, 20242 min read
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Be Motivated, or Be Manipulated
“People are not lazy, … they have goals which do not inspire them.” – Tony Robbins. I have never particularly subscribed to Tony Robbins...
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May 19, 20241 min read
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Dueling Dialogue
We have talked about dialogue tags, action tags, and the setting dialogue inside of a larger context of the tale. For the moment I want...
kevinholochwostaut
May 16, 20244 min read
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Read to Your Health
Let’s talk briefly about mental health. According to the CDC “In 2020, 20.3% of adults had received any mental health treatment in the...
kevinholochwostaut
May 14, 20243 min read
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The Slope
I am going to postulate that life is about the slope of the incline. When we are young, high school seems hard, but if you are a...
kevinholochwostaut
May 12, 20242 min read
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Talking about Singing
In novels, song and verse are, or can be, a kind of dialogue that elevates the piece. In real life throughout human history we have sung....
kevinholochwostaut
May 11, 20244 min read
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Let’s Talk About Money
In the United States, movie tickets typically range in price from about $9 to $20 per person. If you get some popcorn, lets call it 50...
kevinholochwostaut
May 7, 20242 min read
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I Dare You
Write down one day. I dare you. You are going to be upset, and if you are honest about doing it and what you want in life you are likely...
kevinholochwostaut
May 4, 20242 min read
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Bad Dialogue: Case Study 1
I will never review a bad book on my site, because there is enough negativity in the world, and to be frank, I know how hard it is to...
kevinholochwostaut
May 3, 20243 min read
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Reading Foreign
I would like to talk a little today about The Witcher . It is a series of six fantasy novels and short stories by Polish author Andrzej...
kevinholochwostaut
Apr 30, 20242 min read
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More...
Everything you make is worth more, the more any one thing you make is worth.
kevinholochwostaut
Apr 27, 20242 min read
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Get to The Point
Dialogue must have a point and a purpose. It must teach us something about the world, about the characters, about their emotions, the...
kevinholochwostaut
Apr 26, 20243 min read
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Time Enough for… Eternity
Actually, I want to talk about Time Enough for Love. Robert Heinlein is about the biggest name you can get in the history of science...
kevinholochwostaut
Apr 23, 20242 min read
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Less Than.
Everyone has had a moment when they look at the perceived competition and think to themselves, “I am less than…” The problem is, there is...
kevinholochwostaut
Apr 20, 20243 min read
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