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Editing 101: Part I
It has taken me two years of concerted effort, reading several books, listening to many podcasts, and writing multiple novels and short...
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Jun 20, 20243 min read
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What's Your Percentage?
How much negativity in your feedback can you stand? 10%... 20%? 90%? Every writer needs negative criticism. We need to be told no. We...
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Jun 13, 20242 min read
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Perspective
Who you link to for a Point of View (POV) is extremely important in storytelling. I am going to give an example of a very short piece...
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Jun 6, 20245 min read
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Dialogue: When to Shut up
We have talked before about good and bad dialogue. In summary, bad dialogue is dialogue that is long-winded, generic, tells us nothing,...
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Jun 1, 20242 min read
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Dialogue: Filler Words
Crafting dialogue that sounds like real speech while still being purposeful and engaging can be difficult. Real conversations often...
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May 24, 20242 min read
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Dueling Dialogue
We have talked about dialogue tags, action tags, and the setting dialogue inside of a larger context of the tale. For the moment I want...
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May 16, 20244 min read
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Talking about Singing
In novels, song and verse are, or can be, a kind of dialogue that elevates the piece. In real life throughout human history we have sung....
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May 11, 20244 min read
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Bad Dialogue: Case Study 1
I will never review a bad book on my site, because there is enough negativity in the world, and to be frank, I know how hard it is to...
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May 3, 20243 min read
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Get to The Point
Dialogue must have a point and a purpose. It must teach us something about the world, about the characters, about their emotions, the...
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Apr 26, 20243 min read
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Talking About Talking... Redux
We've talked about dialogue before on this channel, but it turns out I have more to say! For the previous section of dialogue review...
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Apr 18, 20243 min read
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Tropes: Dystopia
The trope of dystopia is a fascinating and often chilling exploration of imagined societies characterized by oppression, suffering, and...
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Apr 11, 20244 min read
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Time Travel Tropes. Time Travel Tropes. Time Travel Tropes…
(Get it? Stuck in a loop?...) Time travel is a staple of many science fiction stories and rears its head though less frequently in...
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Apr 4, 20244 min read
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Trope: It’s the end of the world as we know it. And I feel fine.
(The title's reference if you've never heard it: REM Music Video.) Until now we have mostly discussed the tropes using fantasy examples,...
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Mar 28, 20244 min read
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Prophecies and legends
The trope of "prophecies and legends of long-gone times" has been a staple in fantasy literature for centuries going back literally to...
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Mar 21, 20243 min read
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Trope: The Reluctant Protagonist
In fantasy literature, film, and other media, the reluctant protagonist is a common archetype. This character is often thrust into a...
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Mar 14, 20243 min read
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The Trope of the Hidden Lineage
The trope of the hidden lineage is very common in fantasy novels. I will prove to you with example that there is nothing inherently wrong...
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Mar 7, 20244 min read
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Tropes
The word trope can refer to any type of figure of speech, theme, image, character, or plot element that is used many times in particular...
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Feb 22, 20242 min read
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How to write Part 9: The Final Frontier
The last step for any architectural writer is to begin to put even more meat into each scene. Like a painting, the scenes will be built...
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Feb 17, 20245 min read
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How to write part 8: Meat on them’ Bones.
To this point we have created scenes, characters, plots, outlines, and flow for our tale. The time has come to start adding the details....
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Feb 8, 20244 min read
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The Skeleton, Part II
A reader DM’ed me and said “a linear order is not as important to me as a 'meaningful order.'" My question is as follows: Since for most...
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Feb 1, 20244 min read
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