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One In a Million
“You’re one in a million.” We all know the phrase. Technically speaking, we are all one in a million. No one else has ever walked your...
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Oct 20, 20242 min read


Under Attack!
My story is under attack. My story is being broken. They hate it. They hate me. Nobody understands what I am trying to create. Why don’t...
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Oct 12, 20242 min read


Editing 104: Why to Consider Architectural Editing
After the last post, a question was posed: why should we consider doing it this way? Today, I want to spend some time answering that...
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Aug 8, 20244 min read


Editing 103: The First Passes
You finished a draft of your novel. Congratulations are in order! Let’s talk about the next steps. Whenever you choose to edit, remember...
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Aug 1, 20243 min read


Editing 102: When to Edit?
When should you edit your work? Much like how you should write your book, there is no right answer. There are many options, and you need...
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Jul 25, 20243 min read


Editing 101: Part I
It has taken me two years of concerted effort, reading several books, listening to many podcasts, and writing multiple novels and short...
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Jun 20, 20243 min read


What's Your Percentage?
How much negativity in your feedback can you stand? 10%... 20%? 90%? Every writer needs negative criticism. We need to be told no. We...
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Jun 13, 20242 min read


Perspective
Who you link to for a Point of View (POV) is extremely important in storytelling. I am going to give an example of a very short piece...
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Jun 6, 20245 min read


Dialogue: When to Shut up
We have talked before about good and bad dialogue. In summary, bad dialogue is dialogue that is long-winded, generic, tells us nothing,...
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Jun 1, 20242 min read


Dialogue: Filler Words
Crafting dialogue that sounds like real speech while still being purposeful and engaging can be difficult. Real conversations often...
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May 24, 20242 min read


Dueling Dialogue
We have talked about dialogue tags, action tags, and the setting dialogue inside of a larger context of the tale. For the moment I want...
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May 16, 20244 min read


Talking about Singing
In novels, song and verse are, or can be, a kind of dialogue that elevates the piece. In real life throughout human history we have sung....
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May 11, 20244 min read


Bad Dialogue: Case Study 1
I will never review a bad book on my site, because there is enough negativity in the world, and to be frank, I know how hard it is to...
kevinholochwostaut
May 3, 20243 min read


Get to The Point
Dialogue must have a point and a purpose. It must teach us something about the world, about the characters, about their emotions, the...
kevinholochwostaut
Apr 26, 20243 min read


Talking About Talking... Redux
We've talked about dialogue before on this channel, but it turns out I have more to say! For the previous section of dialogue review...
kevinholochwostaut
Apr 18, 20243 min read


Tropes: Dystopia
The trope of dystopia is a fascinating and often chilling exploration of imagined societies characterized by oppression, suffering, and...
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Apr 11, 20244 min read


Time Travel Tropes. Time Travel Tropes. Time Travel Tropes…
(Get it? Stuck in a loop?...) Time travel is a staple of many science fiction stories and rears its head though less frequently in...
kevinholochwostaut
Apr 4, 20244 min read


Trope: It’s the end of the world as we know it. And I feel fine.
(The title's reference if you've never heard it: REM Music Video.) Until now we have mostly discussed the tropes using fantasy examples,...
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Mar 28, 20244 min read


Prophecies and legends
The trope of "prophecies and legends of long-gone times" has been a staple in fantasy literature for centuries going back literally to...
kevinholochwostaut
Mar 21, 20243 min read


Trope: The Reluctant Protagonist
In fantasy literature, film, and other media, the reluctant protagonist is a common archetype. This character is often thrust into a...
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Mar 14, 20243 min read
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