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Find Your Metaphorical Garden
I want to introduce a new series on this site, which will be about your metaphorical garden and my literal one. Sort of. I don’t mean I...
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Aug 7, 20242 min read


Editing 103: The First Passes
You finished a draft of your novel. Congratulations are in order! Let’s talk about the next steps. Whenever you choose to edit, remember...
kevinholochwostaut
Aug 1, 20243 min read


Bibliotherapy part 3: The Children
Children are stressed. In interviews with adolescents and children at remarkably young ages, they are self-reporting depression, sadness,...
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Jul 30, 20242 min read


Editing 102: When to Edit?
When should you edit your work? Much like how you should write your book, there is no right answer. There are many options, and you need...
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Jul 25, 20243 min read


Read Locally
I am recently back from a work trip and short vacation in the same area, and I am reminded once again of the statement I decided on...
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Jul 23, 20242 min read


When Nobody Believes
You have exercised every day for a month, but you barely lose one pound. You lift every day for three months and can barely add a pound...
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Jun 22, 20241 min read


Editing 101: Part I
It has taken me two years of concerted effort, reading several books, listening to many podcasts, and writing multiple novels and short...
kevinholochwostaut
Jun 20, 20243 min read


Don't Outsource Your Knowledge
This morning an ad on YouTube mentioned that I could have an AI assistant to help tie together all my known financial inputs and outputs...
kevinholochwostaut
Jun 19, 20244 min read


What's Your Percentage?
How much negativity in your feedback can you stand? 10%... 20%? 90%? Every writer needs negative criticism. We need to be told no. We...
kevinholochwostaut
Jun 13, 20242 min read


The Empire's Ruin (Ashes of the Unhewn Throne, Book 1)
I am a new reader of Brian Staveley’s work. I regret to admit I had not seen his previous trilogy when it hit the shelves and haven’t...
kevinholochwostaut
Jun 11, 20242 min read


Perspective
Who you link to for a Point of View (POV) is extremely important in storytelling. I am going to give an example of a very short piece...
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Jun 6, 20245 min read


Dialogue: When to Shut up
We have talked before about good and bad dialogue. In summary, bad dialogue is dialogue that is long-winded, generic, tells us nothing,...
kevinholochwostaut
Jun 1, 20242 min read


Bibliotherapy part 2:
Do you want to reduce stress levels, lower heart rate, and ease tension in the muscles? Usually, this kind of claim is a start toa bad...
kevinholochwostaut
May 28, 20242 min read


Dialogue: Filler Words
Crafting dialogue that sounds like real speech while still being purposeful and engaging can be difficult. Real conversations often...
kevinholochwostaut
May 24, 20242 min read


To reread, or not to reread: Dune
I read Dune many years ago, when I was in my teens, and I didn’t care for the book. I never moved on to other books in the series. But....
kevinholochwostaut
May 21, 20242 min read


Be Motivated, or Be Manipulated
“People are not lazy, … they have goals which do not inspire them.” – Tony Robbins. I have never particularly subscribed to Tony Robbins...
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May 19, 20241 min read


Dueling Dialogue
We have talked about dialogue tags, action tags, and the setting dialogue inside of a larger context of the tale. For the moment I want...
kevinholochwostaut
May 16, 20244 min read


Read to Your Health
Let’s talk briefly about mental health. According to the CDC “In 2020, 20.3% of adults had received any mental health treatment in the...
kevinholochwostaut
May 14, 20243 min read


The Slope
I am going to postulate that life is about the slope of the incline. When we are young, high school seems hard, but if you are a...
kevinholochwostaut
May 12, 20242 min read


Talking about Singing
In novels, song and verse are, or can be, a kind of dialogue that elevates the piece. In real life throughout human history we have sung....
kevinholochwostaut
May 11, 20244 min read
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